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Then suddenly it hits you.
Like a cold wave.
A numb pain.
She doesnt love me.
Theres nothing for her to gain.
It's Slowly seaping in.
Losing everything.
My Mind body and soul.
The emotions are so deciving.
Please fix me now.
It's Taking over.
Distryoing the warmth
Hurting me deep within.
A fierce ache.
Feeling so fake.
A Agony,
A strong bitterness.
Feeling so hopeless.
The hurt.
The distressed.
wanting to dismantle the lonelyness.
Struck though my heart.
Now everythings falling apart
Breaking so easy.
Being so fragile.
Seaching for a new light.
I'm not going to put up much of a fight.
Not feeling like this.
Feeling so amiss.
Its far too soon.
I still desire you.
If only you adored me too..
©2007-2009 ~AeonNezo
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:iconartistical-whore:
again same as the other one, well written.
kinda made me sad...hm
:iconaeonnezo:
:]]
-hug-

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If you have sex, you will get pregnant and die.
c:
:iconartistical-whore:
lol go you hah ;D
i enjoy reading ur writting
:iconaeonnezo:
I'd finish off that story If i wernt so lazy.

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If you have sex, you will get pregnant and die.
c:
:iconbloodytearsofremorse:
I like this one. The whatever emotions you wanted to create, I'm pretty sure you did.

One thing, "A Agony" isn't proper grammar. It'd be "An Agony" I'm sorry ^^; I just have this thing with grammar

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I dug up Einstien's bones and made him say I'm sorry for that weakass theory of relativity. Because, mc2 = me, see?

I liquified E.T. and Alf and drank of their plasma. I'm the mother fucker who gave Darth Vader asthma.
:iconaeonnezo:
xD
I had the excact same thing with Alyx. She pulled me up on it too, I was just a bit lazy.. :c
I couldnt be arsed to change it. x]

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If you have sex, you will get pregnant and die.
c:
:iconaeonnezo:
Pssh.

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If you have sex, you will get pregnant and die.
c:
:iconbloodytearsofremorse:
Hahaha, thats alright. I mean, you could just goof it off and call it "creative writing" ;)

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I dug up Einstien's bones and made him say I'm sorry for that weakass theory of relativity. Because, mc2 = me, see?

I liquified E.T. and Alf and drank of their plasma. I'm the mother fucker who gave Darth Vader asthma.

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